For the intro do not just have “in my opinion”, either not include that or have “I will prove this”, whether I am right or wrong.
In bibliography include any books that have helped my study. (Wally Olins / Naomi Klein). Then separate into sections. Books / Websites / Focus Groups / etc.
Harvard reference any of my definitions. Make sure every time I have taken something from a source that I do this. After every page.
For my list of illustrations, include the charts as well ( Chart 1, Chart 2, etc )
Have a thank you page, recognising the help I got from certain people, tutors, family, focus groups, etc.
Title all my images throughout dissertation as well as in the list of illustrations. Not necessarily the charts either.
Conclusion. Does it make me look at my studio work in a different way, or perhaps the same way but stronger. Talk about my Journey.
The final dissertation has to be fully finished and printed properly for hand in on the 25th January 2013.