For the intro do not just have “in my opinion”, either not include that or have “I will prove this”, whether I am right or wrong.

In bibliography include any books that have helped my study. (Wally Olins / Naomi Klein). Then separate into sections. Books / Websites / Focus Groups / etc.

Harvard reference any of my definitions. Make sure every time I have taken something from a source that I do this. After every page.

For my list of illustrations, include the charts as well ( Chart 1, Chart 2, etc )

Have a thank you page, recognising the help I got from certain people, tutors, family, focus groups, etc.

Title all my images throughout dissertation as well as in the list of illustrations. Not necessarily the charts either.

Conclusion. Does it make me look at my studio work in a different way, or perhaps the same way but stronger. Talk about my Journey.

The final dissertation has to be fully finished and printed properly for hand in on the 25th January 2013.

“What is good about the draft dissertation and the Web-site:

First chapter title should be ‘The Brands’ – and you must introduce the general idea/definition of a brand, its function and place in our consumer society in a few paragraphs before you then introduce us to the Brand you are going to focus on (Chanel).

Your use of focus groups and questionnaires is extremely good – don’t hide the charts in the Appendices, use them as illustrations in your text. (Leave samples of the questionnaires in the Appendices) Also when you introduce your questionnaires, you must profile the groups involved in more detail. Give us their ages, gender etc right at the beginning. I’ll talk to you about this in class.

On the second page of the ‘Piracy’ chapter, you talk about a group of people in class who you talked to about piracy –  again, give us as much detail as possible about these people when you first introduce them. They are not just ‘people in class’, but women, aged xx to xx, and anything else you can tell us about them – before you then disclose what they had to say.

A few pages later you talk about the difficulties of telling the difference between a real Chanel bag and a pirated one (it was a made up comparison)…why don’t you try a real experiment (you might not be able to do it with a Chanel bag but maybe you can do it with another brand).

We’ll discuss this all in class – but you have brought your dissertation to life with all of these discussions – good! This is a mode of research that works for you!

The Reflective Research Diary – excellent, good reflection and an interesting read

 

What could be improved?

We need to go over some of your paragraphing in class (you use long paragraphs and don’t always give your reader an opportunity to breathe!).

You need to have your text proofread… as we all do.

You need to credit your focus groups/questionnaires in your text with Harvard Referencing – and again in your Bibliography.

Keep going Jordan and get as much done as you can!”

 

By LizMcQuiston

After showing my Dissertation Outline and a chapter that I have completed, here were the points to be improved on and also the notes from the afternoon lecture.

Add the title to the dissertation outline as well as numbering the chapters in which I will order my dissertation upon. Once done, send to Liz.

Try to keep my dissertation between 7-9,000 words as this is a good number to work around.

Think about a possible experiment that I can do that will enhance my research and dissertation purpose, maybe this could be done in a form of a questionnaire that lots of people can fill out.

Try to relate the dissertation with my own work. Perhaps when talking about the brands and say how they have changed also talk about how this perhaps has influenced my practice at Uni for other classes.

Appendices is a list of resources / photos / that I want them to see that are too bulky for the main part of my dissertation. It is not just a dumping ground for all my research.

Structure and writing styles Lecture

Think about the style and tone of the dissertation and how i want it to be perceived by the reader.

Analyse as I go throughout the dissertation.

Try not to over use “I” throughout. Change it up with Myself and Me.

Make it clear when changing voice from talking about something and some one to about myself using “I” and “Me”.

Paragraph writing.

Introduce it, something the reader might not know (1-2 sentences)

Give supporting information . Key elements to the topics. Describe in a fuller view (several sentences)

Conclude. What does the provided information mean? Do not assume that you will come to the same conclusion as the reader ( 2-4 sentences)  Remember this does not have to emphasise by stating “this means” or “and to conclude” etc. You can be much more subtle than that.

 

Think about design layouts for my my dissertation, how I want it to look for the final hand in. Book, magazine, newspaper, 3D, etc.

Think about illustration that i need to use.

When handing in my first draft, include the blog as my research diary as well.

Make the formative draft for the 2nd November 2012 as one large document. Including:

  • My Title page – including, name of student, course (with pathway/specialism) and year of graduation
  • Contents Page
  • List of Illustrations
  • Acknowledgments
  • Introduction
  • Text Arranged in chapters or sections
  • Conclusion
  • Appendices
  • Bibliography

 

Article found: http://www.ibtimes.com/how-much-does-us-lose-chinas-piracy-48-billion-644062

By Simon H. Powell, 18th May 2011.

Accessed: 16th October 2012.

How much does the US lose to China’s piracy? $48 Billion

According to a report released by the U.S International Trade Comission, in 2009 China’s continuous practice of piracy over American products cost the US approximately $48 billion in business.

The losses  came from the information, service, high-tech and heavy manufacturing sectors for the most part accounting for $44 billion or 91.6% of the total loss.

The report further concluded that if China had kept its obligations to protect US businesses’ intellectual property rights, 2.1 million jobs could have been created in the US according to Reuters.

To this, Max Baucus, Senate Finance Committee Chairman, stated how China had fell short ‘time and time again’ to ensure US rights and interests over such property. He continued on by saying that the negligence of such activity produced real consequences as many Americans have lost their jobs thus that it couldn’t be ignored.

Article found: http://blogs.miis.edu/trade/2010/11/23/us-lost-profit-on-chinas-counterfeits/

By Shen Liu, 23rd November 2010.

Accesed: 16th October 2012

 

China’s Piracy & Counterfeiting Problems

The U.S. Commerce Department estimates suggest that U.S. companies lose over $1 billion per year of legitimate business due to piracy, while the U.S. Trade Representative calculates that more purchases of legitimate software and entertainment media alone would reduce the U.S. trade deficit with China by $2.5 to $3 billion per year. Understanding which businesses are most vulnerable to these losses is important for investors evaluating a company’s China strategy.

Even casual observers of China are aware that digital media, ranging from movies to software to music, are readily pirated in China due to their cheap duplication cost relative to their retail street price. Increasingly, the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA) has been training Chinese and Hong Kong law enforcement officials to identify and bust large-scale movie pirates. This is beginning to have an impact in Hong Kong, where the local MPAA representative is a former Hong Kong policeman himself who brings good law enforcement relationships to the table. As a result of pressure from the MPAA, Hong Kong law enforcement has shutdown many malls that specialize in pirated digital media. This drop in the availability of pirated media has coincided with a drop in the price of authentic movies on DVD and VCD, which has absorbed some of the demand for movies from highly price-elastic consumers who only purchase low-cost pirated media before. However Hong Kong is a far smaller market than the mainland.

Mainland China limits the legal importation of foreign movies to twenty per year. Accordingly, it is only pirated movies that can fulfill excess demand – as well as provide copies of the 20 “allowed” films during the time the state censors are editing them. Movie industry estimates are that 95% of all videos sold in China, an estimated $1.3 billion market, are pirated. Investors in media-driven companies aspiring to make a profit selling content in China should not hold their breath because, in order for U.S. media companies to significantly profit from a crackdown in piracy in China, it may also be necessary for China to increase the number of legitimate imports of foreign films allowed each year. China’s WTO commitment under the General Agreement on Trade in Services (GATS) allows China to maintain this twenty film limit legally.

Statistics highlight the high degree of software piracy in China. As of 2004, China was the sixth largest market in the world for personal computers, yet only the twenty-sixth largest for software sales. U.S. business software publishers calculated a loss of $1.47 billion in sales in China that year due to piracy. If personal entertainment software were included added to this calculation, this number would be even higher.

There may be hope over the long-term however. A few companies have sought to use piracy to their advantage over the long run. Microsoft is a leading example of this approach. While pirated copies of the Microsoft Windows operating system abound throughout China, Microsoft has met some limited success capitalizing on this by:

  1. “Upselling” genuine copies of the software for a very low price to users of pirated copies
  2. Using the widespread distribution of pirated software to train the populace how to use your product. Thus, as a result of piracy, tens of millions of Chinese became competent using Microsoft Windows and Microsoft Office applications.

Because Microsoft regularly offers new upgrades of its operating system and applications, it can profit from the sales of later upgrades even if current users have not developed the belief that they should have to pay the retail price for their software.

Likewise, online games that provide free desktop software but require a monthly usage fee, such as Worlds of Warcraft, are less susceptible to piracy in China. These games are able to limit access to the gameplaying community, which is essential to enjoyment of the game, to those who actually pay the fee. However desktop productivity software, such as Google Apps, that are provided online in exchange for a recurring fee, may not be able to turn its rental-based income stream into profits in China because desktop-based substitutes are readily available.

Damage to Brand Names

The U.S. Commerce Department estimates that, on average, twenty percent of all consumer products in the Chinese market are counterfeit. When counterfeit products fail, it can impact the real brand’s reputation as well. In China and around the world, counterfeit Chinese medicines have injured and killed hundreds of thousands, ranging from toothpaste and cold medicine in Panama to diet pills in Japan. Chinese authorities estimated that nearly 200,000 people were killed in China in 2001 due to counterfeit medicines. In a recent raid on a printing factory in the southern Chinese province of Guangdong, police seized bogus packaging and labels for Coca Cola bottles, Wrigley‘s chewing gum, General Mills‘Trix breakfast cereal, and Nestle‘s Purina cat food. In order to prevent a scare similar to the Tylenol-tampering episode in the U.S. many years ago, foreign companies need shift into publicity overdrive to discredit and distinguish dangerous or shoddy counterfeit goods, lest their own products be tarred.

Similarly, counterfeit products impinge on the ability of Western companies to select and control their own distribution channels. Thus, even though Starbucks (SBUX) invested heavily in training its Chinese workers, it had to rush to court in 2003 to stop a copycat rival from misappropriating its logo and store look under the name “Xingbake” in 2003. “Xing” means “star” in Mandarin and “bake” sounds like “bucks” when pronounced in Chinese.

Effects Outside of China

The Motor and Equipment Manufacturer’s Association estimates that eighty percent of all counterfeit automobile parts imported into the U.S. originate in China or Hong Kong, costing the auto industry over $9 billion per year in lost sales. Likewise, hundreds of millions of dollars per year are lost to due to the export of China pirated DVDs and CDs each year; this figure may accelerate with the proliferation of new digital movie formats, including HD-DVD and Blu-Ray. U.S. Department of Homeland Security (DHS) agents, working in conjunction with the Chinese government and private industry, conducted the first ever joint U.S.–Chinese enforcement action on the Chinese mainland and seized more than 210,000 counterfeit movie DVDs. Similarly, DHS agents recently stopped a combined Chinese and Middle-Eastern organization that was responsible for the smuggling and nationwide distribution of over 100 containers of counterfeit trademark merchandise, valued in excess of $400 million, that had already been smuggled into the U.S in less than a year..

 

 Impact on Chinese Innovation and Future Export Potential

Chinese counterfeits are hurting the country’s own future export potential. A recent case of counterfeit ingredients poisoning medicines in Panama and Australia has put authorities there on guard against all Chinese imports of food and medicine. Similarly, dangerous fake dog food ingredients from China have made U.S. consumers wary of any foodstuffs coming from there.

 

 Impact of Foreign Direct Investment

Foreign direct investment in China is limited by fears of counterfeiting. Many Western companies who possess proprietary technology are hesitant to move production, let alone research and development to China, for fear it will be copied. This means China is losing valuable opportunities to move its production to more sophisticated, higher value-add and higher margin products, as well as missing opportunities to train its workforce on more sophisticated product development techniques. As low-wage competitors like Vietnam develop their industrial output, China will be forced to compete solely on the basis of wages if it cannot improve its know-how and export product mix.

 

 Future of China’s Piracy & Counterfeiting problems and TRIPS laws

The Chinese have taken some steps to combat piracy and counterfeiting, although there remains much more to be done in actions vs. issuing statements. The recent creation of the State Intellectual Property Offices, is one small step.

China only joined the WTO in 2001, until recently the country was in a discretionary period which that have just gotten out of. This period gave them some leeway in terms of which of the organization’s rules the country had to adhere to. Now that the probationary period has ended the country is trying to demonstrate an effort towards compliance. Universities are endeavoring towards IP law and there is some effort by the National Copyright Administration to close down unlawful websites and servers.

China has dramatically increased its patent filings producing over 200,000 patents in 2006. While some would say that this increase of patents gives them more reason to abide by international law, it remains to be seen whether this is proven.

Article found: 

http://www.itestcash.com/history-of-counterfeiting.html

Accessed: 16th October 2012.

History of Counterfeiting 

Counterfeiting is not a new phenomenon – it is a crime that has been around since ancient times. The act of copying and printing fake currency is just about as old as currency itself. At one point counterfeiting was so serious and widespread that it was considered treasonous and punishable by death if the perpetrator was caught. This was because many believed that anyone who disturbed the market with fake money was putting the nation’s economy and its general stability and strength in serious jeopardy.

The ancient Romans were frequent victims of fake currency. The majority of Roman currency consisted of pure gold and silver coins. Counterfeiters would mix various metals, cast them as coins and plate them with either gold or silver to create a much less valuable copy of the money which was called fourrée. Old coin molds have been found that prove the existence of a widespread counterfeiting operation by criminal minded inhabitants of the Roman empire. Authentic Roman coinage was struck, not cast with molds.

In America, during the American Revolution and the Civil War, counterfeit money was abundant. The British counterfeited Continental American money and flooded it into the money system to the point where the currency became worthless. This is where the expression “Not worth a Continental” came from. During the Civil War over 1,600 state banks were responsible for designing and printing their own currency, so eventually there were so many different varieties of currency floating around (approximately 7,000) that it was virtually impossible to tell a real from a fake. More than one-third of the currency in circulation at that time was phony. Finally in 1862 the U.S. Government had to establish a national currency to fix the counterfeit problem, but counterfeiters easily copied the new currency. The amount of fake currency circulating around the country at that time made it necessary for the government to establish the Secret Service in 1865, a division responsible for stopping the spread of forged money in the United States.

Recently, the counterfeit problem is again on the rise due to new technologies in printing and design software. However, the spread of fake bills has been suppressed by creative measures by the U.S. Department of Treasury’s Bureau of Engraving and Printing, the division of United States government that is responsible for the actual design and printing of money. The Bureau has recently recrafted the 10, 20, 50 and 100 dollar bills with bigger faces, multi-colored paper, holograms, and reflective inks that change color depending on the lighting. They also have implemented the EURion constellation on newer bills, a technology that makes it impossible to duplicate the money on a photocopier. The two main purposes of these measures is to make it easier for the average person to recognize a fake when presented with one, and to discourage attempts to copy the bill.

While an ever growing technological environment has made it easier for law enforcement officials and the general public to stop the spread of counterfeit money, technology has also made it easier for criminals to carry on with their illegal actions. It is extremely important that governments maintain a proactive and ever changing policy towards thwarting the spread of bogus currency.